Entry1_PhungVuChauLong

20 Sep

item 1: cartoon

Source: http://my.opera.com/Le%20Manh%20Hung/blog/simple-entry-for-the-weekend-the-message-to-everyone

Message: try your best till the last breathe

Item 2: cartoon

Source: http://wapedia.mobi/vi/Ho%E1%BA%A1t_%C4%91%E1%BB%99ng_c%E1%BB%A7a_H%E1%BB%93_Ch%C3%AD_Minh_trong_giai_%C4%91o%E1%BA%A1n_1911-1941

Message: this picture implies that the French colony had lied about thier domestication in Vietnam.

item 3: story
The mouse, the cat ,and the rooster
A little mouse went into the yard, she walked around and then went back to her mother.
_”Oh, mother, i saw two animals .One fringhting, the other nice.””
_”Tell me what the animals were like” said the mother.
_” The frighting one was strutting about the yard””said the mouse.”He had black legs, a red comb,goggley eyes and a hooked nose. When i past , he opened his beak, raised his foot and began to shout so loudly that he scared me stiff”
_” That”s the rooster”, said the old mouse.”he never does anyone any harm.Don”t be afraid of him.But what about the other animal?”
_” The other one was basking in the sun.He had white neck and smooth grey feet.He licked his white chest and waved his tail gently as he looked at me”
_”You are a silly thing!” said the mouse.” that was the cat”

Source: http://bacbaphi.com.vn/entertainment/showthread.php?70142-Learn-English-through-parables-H%E1%BB%8Dc-ti%E1%BA%BFng-Anh-qua-truy%E1%BB%87n-ng%E1%BB%A5-ng%C3%B4n

message: do not look the appearance to assess the spirit inside

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7 Responses to “Entry1_PhungVuChauLong”

  1. daothihongnhung September 21, 2011 at 2:36 pm #

    Hi Long,
    I want to add the rhetorical devices which are used in item 1:
    Metaphor: -The crane: human
    -The frog: obstacles

  2. vuthiphuongthanhe24 September 21, 2011 at 4:12 pm #

    Generally, your items that you chose are suitable and included many deep meanings, and the messages that you realized from that are very good. The sources are cited clearly.
    However, in my opinion, you should find out some clues in the cartoons that help you understand their implications. what’s more important is that you did not show the rhetorical devices in both two cartoons and also in the story.
    In terms of the appearance of the ITEM 3, you should focus more on the font, some mistakes in spelling and punctuation.
    Moreover, in the ITEM 3, I think it has more one implication, that is sometimes, we mistake our real risk and the real danger in the life, especially when we are not mature enough – like the little mouse, and just get the first step into the outside world – a very complicated society with many kinds of people that we have not known before. So let be carefully and keep a clear-sighted mind!

  3. buihoangdinh September 21, 2011 at 4:33 pm #

    i think in item 3, you can add that the crime usually hide behind the beautiful cover and innocent people often be deceived by this affected appearance.

  4. tranthiphuongthao September 22, 2011 at 12:37 am #

    From my perspective, your cartoon and stories are interesting and meaningful, and I agree with all messages you have spotlighted. However, you should point out your analysis of rhetorical devices used in the cartoon and stories. For example, in the cartoon, the rhetorical device is metaphor: the stork – dangerous and difficult situations which can make us discouraged and withdraw, the frog – people who are always willing to encounter difficult situations and never have the idea of giving up. Actually, if you do that, your entry must be more convincing.

  5. duongthithuhuong September 22, 2011 at 4:27 am #

    I agree with the massages you gave, but you should leave your comments on rhetorical devices.
    In my opinion, the item 1 use the antithesis because as you see in the picture, the pelican try to swallow the frog, however, the frog do not give up and try to fight with the pelican. He has no choice to live except for strangling the pelican
    The item 3 use oxymoron because the words the little mouse said are contradictory with the meanings

  6. nguyenthisim October 13, 2011 at 4:20 am #

    I agree with you the messages you pointe out. However, I think the second one also give the message which is the cruel action of the French colony to the Vietnamese. And the rhetorical device for the first one should be metaphor.

  7. nguyenthisim October 13, 2011 at 4:27 am #

    I agree with you the messages you pointe out. However, I think the second one also give the message which is the cruel action of the French colony to the Vietnamese. And the rhetorical device for the first one should be metaphor.

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